You shouldn't let the user manually refresh,, try to implement a replay button.. :) And when the flash loads, it should get focus, everytime I refresh, I need to click on the flash to get focus, that's not cool.

Keep it up!

I liked it.

I think it was OK.
The drawings were sometimes very good, but actually, NOTHING was animated.
There was 1 picture, after another, and another... and so on, nothing inside those pictures was really animated, except for the mouth and some minor things. That's what disturbed me a bit.

The second thing what disturbed me a bit was the voice-acting. It should be a lot more emotional. Maybe you should let someone else do that. You can find VA here on Newgrounds and on: http://voiceacting.proboards62.com/

Hope that helps,
Greetings,
MKjack

Nice!

I liked it, very much though ^^
But I have a question, can you tell me the title of the Song during the fight bewtween Mario & Sonic ^^

I liked that Song, maybe you can tell me its name, or if it is from Newgrounds. ^^
That would be great!

Very nice game! I did it! XD

Yeah! I rocked this game xD
But it wasn't easy, I think I would not be able to finish this game when I hadn't been bored during that puzzle with the pen!
Very nice, and the story is also cool and something modern, I like it!

MKjack

OK.

Game was OK. I like to menu at the beginning, but I've played this game now for... 7-8 minutes and i didnt even get one power-up. That was sad, and the enemies were a bit odd...

Maybe better in a sequel or something!

-MK-Juste

Good.

Good game, i like the Graphics and the Style when the Guy shoots.
It remided me a bit of my Kid Icarus Series.

The thing which was bad, was that you die too quickly.
A life bar would be cool.

Love this song.

I love it.
I would be glad if I could use this song for my diploma project as a main theme, it's non-commercial :) If it will turn commercial one day, I will tell you, and you will be credited of course..

Too good, keep it up!

Cool!

Very cool music. Just what I was searching for.
May I use this song in my own diploma project? It's non-commercial.
If it will turn out to be commercial one day, I will notify you of course :)